Rough Cut Feedback

Today we received feedback on our second edited piece of rough cut footage. Overall the feedback we received was positive even with missing scenes. For the missing scenes we filled in text where they would be on screen to give an impression that it wouldn't cut from one scene to another. We got some really good feedback such as:

• When the killer is walking down the stairs make the sound effect of the knife scraping on the wall earlier.
• Have Will (the victim) look more terrified on several of the scenes, possibly cry for help.
• Parts of the camera work are shaky.
• More variation of shots.

We will be looking to correct these errors when we next set out filming which will be soon. As well as filming new material such as the missing scenes.