Rough Cut feedback

Last week Will finished editing our rough cut piece which contained part of the outside scene as well as the inside scenes.
The feedback we got gave us an outlook on our film opening and also helped us with possible storyline ideas. We also received feedback on lighting, Mis-en-scene, characters and location. The main feedback we received was on Mis-en-scene, we were told to make the cellar look messy and unused some of the ideas were To put smashed glass on the floor, put dirt on the floor and walls, we also needed to make it darker due to the natural lighting shining too brightly on our kidnap victim during the shoot. Will had an idea to use artificial lighting instead and shine it through a grate in the other room.